Mining Recruitment

Hi guys i am working on a case sensitive project and i am going to see to it that it comes out hear for veiwing.
I know how hard it is to get people to rat and mine for the better of a fleet and this that i am working on is going to
bring well lets just say a insentiveness to what they will get to do hehe. now mind you its not all going to have startrek stuff in it but i think it might be exciting still even with out it hehe

*mining corpartion recruitment video comeing to a internet hub near you soon...*

ok that did not take long ok hear it is the heads up for the mining divison any comments or thoughts about improvment post em and ill fix it. the video clips are from star trek online and eve online.

ok ok so maybe the net hates smaller text lol i just finished remastering the text sizes so its legable lol should be up and runing a few minutes after this post hehe

Well done! Great video footage and editing together. I like it.

There are a couple places where the text could be easier to read, especially towards the end, however, you can fix that no problem. I like your idea and concept on this. Keep up the good work!



Some spelling corrections:

*mining "corps" instead of "core" (Don't ask my why they spell it that way, they just do...)

*Responsibility instead of "responseability"

*Whole instead of "hole"

*Benefit instead of Benifit

*Contributions instead of "Contributations"

*Here instead of "Hear"

*Difference instead of "differance"

*Corps again instead of "Core"

*Corps again instead of "Core"

ok i have fixed the spelling errors and am reposting will be availible momentairly

Good video.
You may want to point out that alot of those mining shots are from eve, and not STO.
I think the web addy should be much bigger and perhaps appear at both the start and end of the video.